Mar 29 2009
Upshift Now! Book Excerpt 5: The Art of the Resume (III)
This week you’ll find excerpts here from my e-book, Upshift Now! The Executive’s Guide to Winning a Higher Position. Despite the title, it’s a book for anyone seeking help in a job search, not just executives. If you have comments on the book, please post them here at the blog. I’m interested in your suggestions. If you would enjoy getting a complete PDF of the book, send an email request to Paul@ShimmeringResumes.com. You can find more information about resumes and other job search matters at ShimmeringResumes. Today’s excerpt:
You on a Pedestal: The Art of the Resume (Part 3) Language: Have You Missed the Tripwires?
Language is complex and rich with subtle traps. So if you aren’t careful, you can blur a vital point or sabotage the resume in many other ways. Here are a few tips to spruce this document up:
• Annihilate spelling and grammatical errors. Employers keep the trashcan handy for documents with such mistakes. Don’t depend on spellcheckers, as they won’t catch typos like ”wok” for “work.”
• Eliminate clutter. Trim your prose and it will perk up. Here is a real sentence from another resume site: “A winning resume is a document that you should author, own and craft with a very specific purpose in mind.” Boil it down to “Good resumes have a specific aim” and you gain clarity and life while losing nothing.
• Favor strong verbs. Colorful terms are more emphatic and interesting, and scientific studies show they linger in the memory. For instance, “Spearheaded the development of …” works better than “Initiated the development of …”
• Omit the subject “I” and start sentences with the verb. The style is standard, if curt, and otherwise you repeat “I” endlessly.
• Avoid rumbling run-ons. A four-line sentence is just a set of shorter ones waiting to be set free.
• Vary word choice. Use “professional” just twice in two sentences and the reader will sense staleness.
• Use the right words. Don’t say “continuous” when you mean “continual,” for instance.
• Be precise. Don’t say “improved” when you can say “cut 64 percent.”
• Rise above bureaucratese. “Facilitate” won’t facilitate your job search and “value-added” has negative value-added.
• Extirpate clichés. Terms like “self-starter” and “team player” are so common on resumes that they numb the suffering screener’s mind.
• Avoid terms the employer may not understand. Stay away from jargon and arcane acronyms.
• Shun the passive voice.
Avoid jargon. Resist the temptation to flash expertise by using terms the reader may not understand. You risk clouding your argument and turning off the screener. Of course, specialized terms are sometimes essential, especially in science or high tech. “EBITDA,” mentioned above, is jargon to some, yet no substitute exists. Ultimately, the test is necessity: Do you really have to use a potentially unclear word?
Avoid egotism. Bragging can sabotage your case. Describe yourself as a “genuine visionary” or “born leader” and you raise questions about your authenticity. After all, what born leader goes around boasting about it? If you really possess these qualities, you can show them in your past achievements, to much greater effect. Don’t hold back—make the most powerful case you can—but be careful about forcing conclusions down the employer’s throat.
Show your care for detail. Both you and the employer know how important the resume is to you. If it has careless errors, the screener will reasonably assume the rest of your work is sloppy too. So no typos. No spelling or grammatical mistakes. No tiny formatting snafus. Don’t rely on spell and grammar checkers, which are quite fallible. Proofread your resume meticulously, and then get a fresh pair of eyes to do it again. Try to avoid thinking about content as you proof. When the mind seeks meaning, it is liable to skip typos. We grab the sense, move on, and literally don’t see the “tat” for “that.” Focus letter-by-letter and word-by-word, and the invisible yields up. The process will feel unnatural, but the resume is short and this effort can keep you out of the reject pile.
Make it attractive. You can really gain on competitors here, since so many resumes look like legal notices. Why is that battleship gray appearance so common? Some people assume it’s standard for resumes. This misapprehension comes from ignorance. Resumes do have certain requisites, but ugliness is hardly one of them. A second reason is subtler: the safety of the herd. If drab resumes are the norm, no one can attack you for fitting in. Maybe, but you also won’t gain an edge, and without an edge you won’t get hired. Job search is about winning, not fitting in. Third, many people think that the more they put on the resume, the better. So they cram text into all available space. The result is a detail swamp. But even if you highlight key points, a dense, crowded look will annoy the reader. If the employer finds your resume hard to read, chances are she won’t bother.
It’s all about impression, and a good-looking resume will convey the right subliminal cues to the reader. You don’t want a resume that looks decorative, but a resume with an elegant, distinctive look will convey the right overtones, linger in the employer’s mind, and help set you apart. If you think design doesn’t matter much commercially, look what Steve Jobs has done with it.
You can find more information about resumes and other job search matters at ShimmeringResumes.
